I like both your serial piece and your harmonic construction piece. In both I think you could focus more on the development of clearly identifiable motivic material. I like the idea of having one line p0 and the other r0 but dont forget that you can mix up the rows within the phrase structure as well. In your harmonic piece the lack of the mirrors dont necessarily hurt the piece although it does constitute a somewhat incomplete assignment. Nevertheless, very good submissions.
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Nick,
I like both your serial piece and your harmonic construction piece. In both I think you could focus more on the development of clearly identifiable motivic material. I like the idea of having one line p0 and the other r0 but dont forget that you can mix up the rows within the phrase structure as well. In your harmonic piece the lack of the mirrors dont necessarily hurt the piece although it does constitute a somewhat incomplete assignment. Nevertheless, very good submissions.
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